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Truth
Contributed by
strawberryshortcake
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Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 01:12:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Each tragedy and situation gone wrong is worse than the next
People so unhappy with their own lives
They can't let the innocent children go on living theirs
Children in the years of fun and happiness, full of love
Struck down by someone who knows only hate and anger
Fear seeps into these souls,blackened hearts fill their chests
Sickness and devastation fill their minds
They see only one way to deal
Strike out at the lives that haven't yet been lived
Ending the young lives can't fix the mistakes these psychos make
What could ever clear the mind of a killer?
Can their heart ever be made whole?
Only one answer to these questions----GOD
He makes all the difference!
He never forgot us -
Why have we turned our backs on HIM?
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strawberryshortcake
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2006-10-04 13:12:12]
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Re: Truth
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 02:37:31 PM AEST
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This poem is sad because it reflect reality
so much withh all the school shootings
and everything else going on
great poem filled with emotion
great job keep on writing
i will be reading |
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Re: Truth
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by ever1der on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 03:57:00 PM AEST
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| so many writes about this lately..I guess it's the only way to cope with the horror. At our schools here; the security all wear flack vests and you must be searched with metal detectors to get in..still that doesn't seem enough. Kids build up so much anger..as do adults. They really don't believe in God any more becuse the churches aren't teachhing; they're reaching; for wallets..God is not even a person to many people..he's a myth. |
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Re: Truth
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by secretwind on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 06:29:05 PM AEST
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serious topic
well done |
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Re: Truth
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 7th October 2006 @ 10:32:39 PM AEST
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| well done love the emotion. thank you for your review also can't wait to read more of your work. |
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