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Poison Apples
Contributed by
xxdeathxTOxkristixx
on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 08:48:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I knew it wouldn't last
being normal over-rated
they told me they understood
just exactly what
my body was telling them
apparently they lied.
these wanna-be-lawyers.
dressed for sucess
saving lives
HA! jokes all of them
that's just what they are.
this whole situation
just one big joke
you know, the kind you..
just get TIRED of listening to.
well, I'm tired.
of listening to their diagnosis
dancing around their courtrooms
weaving intricate stories
to make ME a believer.
well I won't.
I'm sick of these antidotes,
that will kill me sooner or later.
I'll eat that apple.
and keep those "doctors" away.
Copyright ©
xxdeathxTOxkristixx
... [
2006-10-04 20:48:04]
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Re: Poison Apples
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 09:19:52 PM AEST
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Good poem sounds like your sueing
someone lol
great poem I liked the flow
and use of wording
great job |
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Re: Poison Apples
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 10:59:39 PM AEST
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Very creative writing.
huggs, smiles,
emy
Hope things turn around for you real soon. |
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Re: Poison Apples
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by sohangme on
Thursday, 5th October 2006 @ 12:40:13 AM AEST
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nicely worded...good job!
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Re: Poison Apples
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by dinolove on
Thursday, 5th October 2006 @ 08:46:49 PM AEST
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| this is good. it's got kind of a dark humor to it. i like it. |
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