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Donkey Ravine
Contributed by
oneir8dude
on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 09:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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What is wrong with the world
Everyones attitudes are unfurled
I walked up to someone and said hello
To a guy who looked like a nice fellow
He looked at me with a blanked expression
I didnt want some added attention
Just a simple hello back would have been fine
It would not have taken up any of his time
Just a simple gesture in passing
Why not send a guy your blessing
When a person takes time to give you two seconds
Or maybe extend an arm to shake hands
Think in your head how you look
And how little time it wouldve took
To give it back and move along
To do otherwise is just so wrong
Dont be an ignorant self centered Jackass
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oneir8dude
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2006-10-04 21:20:00]
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Re: Donkey Ravine
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 09:24:58 PM AEST
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great poem and the pic is awsome and funny too
sounds like you live in new jersey too
I run into those kinds of people all the time
like if they are walking a dog
and i say what kind of dog is that
and they just keep walking as if their dog is too good for you too know lol
great poem i can relate as you see
keep writing i will be reading
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Re: Donkey Ravine
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 09:34:59 PM AEST
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Bill, That pic had me LMAO. What a write. Good venting. I can so relate to this with other folks. People can be rude as hell. Your last line was a classic, man. I had to smile when I read it.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Donkey Ravine
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by ever1der on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 10:21:53 PM AEST
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| HELOOOOO. LOL. right back atcha! howdy pal.. couldn't be better, and how are you? This is funny..written well and the pic is hilarious..hehe |
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Re: Donkey Ravine
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 10:47:29 PM AEST
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Very wise, creative writing.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Donkey Ravine
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by sadaddy on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 11:35:16 PM AEST
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Hello Friend, what a great way of expressing my feelings as well. LOL Of course the wife would have told me “Look sweetie, he looks better than you” LOL not really but the picture is a great expression of your poem. Great Job! Last line says it all. May peace and joy fill your heart.
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Re: Donkey Ravine
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by jerseysue on
Thursday, 5th October 2006 @ 02:20:37 AM AEST
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| Hi Bill, Yes understand this poem very well. Its the way of the world I suppose, but not mine. I speak to everyone , typical woman yo might say, but then I love people and talking is what I do well. ha ha Loved the poem, it speaks volumes. Sue x |
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Re: Donkey Ravine
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by shelby on
Thursday, 5th October 2006 @ 07:10:35 AM AEST
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LOL the pic says it all. Loved the poem itself and your so very right. Iv been running into more jackass than I can count and its not of the four legged sort either, darn ppl!
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Donkey Ravine
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by Kellros on
Friday, 13th October 2006 @ 07:53:55 AM AEST
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| I found this quite amusing and the comparison hilarious :). But remember sometimes it's not ignorance, a person could be just overwhelmed by things happening or circumstances. |
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