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My Love
Contributed by
resiecje
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Friday, 6th October 2006 @ 08:23:20 AM in AEST
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SecretLove
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Words cannot describe my love for you
But I lack the courage to do what I should do
So I retreat back and dream
Of a perfect life of you and me
Shyly I smile when you walk by
Down is my head, my face I hide
I watch you from a distance far away
To shy and afraid to talk to you face to face
I try to speak but no words come out
Of you is all I think about
When will I fear no more
And love is what Ill explore
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resiecje
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2006-10-06 08:23:20]
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Re: My Love
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by shelby on
Friday, 6th October 2006 @ 11:52:48 AM AEST
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awwww hang in there life is as big of a mystery as love is one never knows what may happen:). Lovely write.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: My Love
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by Undiscovered_Diamond on
Friday, 6th October 2006 @ 07:45:17 PM AEST
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| Its amazing to think how much you can touch someone without even realising..Just think..Theres someone who feels the same about you and you dont even know about it cuz your so hung up on someone else..Great poem btw, makes you think xXx |
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Re: My Love
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by Trauma on
Wednesday, 11th October 2006 @ 10:54:13 PM AEST
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| Hey resiecje, really enjoyed the poem, can really relate. It's the worst thing loving someone who barely notices you, I'm going through that right now. Seriously every line felt like you took it from my head. Unrequieted love is the worst, aint it? |
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Re: My Love
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 13th October 2006 @ 12:47:29 PM AEST
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I have felt this way before... It is hard to make them notice you and how you feel about them... Hang in there though..
Take care
christina |
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