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A Puddle in the Moonlight
Contributed by
Chamaron
on
Friday, 6th October 2006 @ 08:57:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Under the moon,
Shame lingers in the pale light.
What have I become?
Walk this lonely street,
Cast out into the darkness,
What have I done?
Out of breath,
Unwanted tears fall,
And I used to think I was strong.
Five years and counting
The war goes on,
And now must I question,
Have I been wrong all along?
Should I give in,
Buckle knees to kneel in praise?
Impossible; still too strong is this hate.
Who am I?
Why me?
After all of this, is it still too late?
Say that through these many battles,
You have been right.
But was it worth breaking me down,
Into nothing more than a puddle in the moonlight?
Copyright ©
Chamaron
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2006-10-06 20:57:30]
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Re: A Puddle in the Moonlight
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by ever1der on
Saturday, 7th October 2006 @ 06:49:59 PM AEST
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| I love the title.. |
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Re: A Puddle in the Moonlight
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by dinolove on
Saturday, 7th October 2006 @ 08:44:18 PM AEST
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| i like this, your writing is excellent. |
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Re: A Puddle in the Moonlight
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by Faust on
Saturday, 7th October 2006 @ 10:45:54 PM AEST
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Interesting write. It's very thought provoking, but with so many questions can you be satisfied with the answers?
Eternally Punished,
Faust |
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