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Feedback appreciated!!
Contributed by
goodandevil
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Sunday, 8th October 2006 @ 11:56:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Nothing can distract me
stars nor city lights
ashamed alone i fear the night
reaching, struggling
to keep what's right
My Life, My love
both gone tonight.
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goodandevil
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2006-10-08 23:56:10]
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Re: Feedback appreciated!!
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by jerseysue on
Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 02:38:38 AM AEST
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| Short and sweet, but your point comes across. Down and lonely, yes it does the trick. Sue x |
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Re: Feedback appreciated!!
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 09:52:46 AM AEST
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Is the the title of your poem "Feedback Appreciated"? I really liked the poem, was just questioning that title.
Peace, Laura |
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