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Sick of Waiting
Contributed by
Kellros
on
Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 08:32:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Kill the words softly muttered,
suffocate the hope that's scattered,
silent the plea dies,
shadows smile and time flies
Thunder cries the evaporation of morality,
river's welcome the flood of brutality,
the sun's kiss of immortality,
drowned in fear of pity.
Stop the walls closing in,
suffocate the dreams within,
waiting for an answer
as time counts on while
picking leafes of life's clover.
Say the words that are not allowed to be said,
greet the cold winds that souls have bled,
promote the illusion that yourself have been fed,
hide the agony before someone realises:
you are dead.
Copyright ©
Kellros
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2006-10-09 08:32:56]
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Re: Sick of Waiting
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 10:00:06 AM AEST
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You can feel your emotions strong in this write. Great read...I could feel my pulse quicken as I reached the end. Great flow to the poem.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Sick of Waiting
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by Alison on
Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 03:26:33 PM AEST
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| wow you chould make that into a song almost! awesome and strong write! |
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