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Time v. Proximity
Contributed by
sir_odd87
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Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 03:10:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When you are so far away
Time moves awefully slow
But the closer you are to me
The slower time seems to go.
That is, until you get here
When time goes flying by
As soon as we get to say hello
It seems we have to say goodbye.
Father Time's a jealous fool
Taking time from lovers only
Ten minutes can last a week
When you find that you are lonely
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2006-10-09 15:10:06]
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Re: Time v. Proximity
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by Kellros on
Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 03:40:14 PM AEST
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| Very true indeed... :) nice write, i've experienced this many times |
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Re: Time v. Proximity
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by Ruby2sdy on
Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 04:11:04 PM AEST
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i like this one.. so true... the way everything goes in slow motion when you're next to him/her, and then when you finally get time to yourselves, it disappears... awesome write, well done,
2sdy x |
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Re: Time v. Proximity
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by Oneir8dude on
Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 04:59:51 PM AEST
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i realy loved this write... especially
the line "Father time's a jealous fool"
Thst line was brilliant....
Nice wording an heart felt meaning here...
I need to read this again...
Great Job Mr.Talent...
Bill |
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Re: Time v. Proximity
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 06:30:06 PM AEST
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| Nicely written |
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