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Dying Angels
Contributed by
SmileSkinDeep
on
Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 10:25:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Bring me the horizon
Ill give you my all
Lasso me the moon and sun
Ill give you: winter, spring, summer, fall
Id give you myself anyways
It doesnt take much to thrill me these days
Im not like I was oh way back when
Now Im just looking for someone to see my ways
Pain seems better than desolation
So it seems after Ive been used to solitude
I know loves neither of our destinations
So why arent we ashamed?
Just to have a good time
Ive perhaps deprived myself
No one to really call mine
Left with an empty heart-ache
For another fun ride
Ill buckle up and hold on tight
This angel is dying inside me
Whats left of what I used to be
Shes fading in my mind and grasp
If I let her go: Ill lose what was me
I know its not time to leave her
I know I still need her near
I dont know what would happen for sure
The futures never clear
Im not ready for that Leap of Faith
I wish I could know Ill fall into your arms
But were only temporary
So how do I know when Ive tripped the alarm?
So why is my angel fading?
Why is she shy of you?
All the while I lie to be elating
Smile, theres nothing else I can do
So why do I return to the very one
Who is killing my angel?
To something I know will not work out
Take a picture from this angle
For it is not my best side
Am I simply settling
Or is this what I really deserve?
Some half-***** attempt for no one but me
This is the credit Ive observed
Why is my angel fading
And I stand and watch her go?
To leave a good life aiming
And what will I know?
Maybe one day I will have better
So my angel has to know
I love her but must watch her go
This angel is dying inside me
Whats left of what I used to be
Shes fading in my mind and grasp
So I let her go: I will lose what was me
I will await my angels return
Until that time love shall, as well, wait its turn
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SmileSkinDeep
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2006-10-09 22:25:32]
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Re: Dying Angels
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 10:46:41 PM AEST
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What a wonderful poem very detailed
and well thoughtout great job
keep on writing i will be reading |
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Re: Dying Angels
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by The_Unknown on
Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 02:26:26 AM AEST
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Great write! I really like this poem. You have a fantabulishous gift!! Never let it go. Keep up the good work!
luvs ya ;)
.~*Jess*~. |
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Re: Dying Angels
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by brew on
Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 07:48:54 AM AEST
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Now this was deep........Very well described what one feels.! Hold on to that, and Im sure it can turn paths. ! Thanks for the comment on my write......I do know if ugly is in the inner it makes all ugly, yet.....I just cant see why ppl only look for the outer, of things.! Inside is what MAKES some see..not just skin on the outer.! Great post
Brew~ |
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Re: Dying Angels
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 11:16:09 AM AEST
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| deep innervision |
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Re: Dying Angels
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by Jen54 on
Wednesday, 11th October 2006 @ 07:59:09 AM AEST
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Its wonderful. I like the way you made us readers see the words in our head like a movie.
-Jen
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Re: Dying Angels
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th October 2006 @ 04:51:07 AM AEST
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| I Loved this poem. I could relate but in a different way. a beautiful poem |
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