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Me, Myself and My little Man...
Contributed by
oneir8dude
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Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 11:42:52 PM in AEST
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I sat today talking to myself, back when I was fourteen
I enjoyed visiting with me and enjoyed my life as a teen
As I watched myself walking away
I thought of a question I should say
Let me ask you before you leavehow do you think I turned out
I turned and said youre a good dad thats what it is all about
In the moment of the day I watched myself play ball
I can remember back when, back when I did it all
I helped myself do my homework at the table
I even helped myself work on my car The Sable
As my day ended and I gave myself a kiss goodnight
I watched me walk away till I was out of sight
My day was beautiful and filled with joyful memories
Of my life as a kid, dont go so fast I beg and plea
I live vicariously through my son
I am holding my youth and having fun
He looks just like me and has my thoughts
I guess I gave it to him in all I taught
When I look in the mirror I see an older version of my little man
When I see him growing into himself I am his biggest fan
I will always be proud and hold him on high
So with his future he can take off to fly
My son you are my Breath, My life, My little man
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oneir8dude
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Re: Me, Myself and My little Man...
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by emystar on
Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 11:50:55 PM AEST
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Lawd have mercy friend,
This is beautifull from your blue eyes to his dark hair.
You've really created a masterpeice here!
U r hot.
sorry jus have to say truth.
Great work! |
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Re: Me, Myself and My little Man...
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 11:53:21 PM AEST
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Bill, You teddybear *smiles*. What a wonderful write. This is Craig, right? Nice pic, although it looks like the flash blinded the poor kid. LOL I hope you've shared this write with your son, it is very touching indeed. You have a big heart, big guy. Thanks for sharing with us.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Me, Myself and My little Man...
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by sadaddy on
Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 01:08:30 AM AEST
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WOW Dude, that is a remarkable piece of work you have created. Great Job! May the peace and joy that fills your heart give you many blessings.
sadaddy |
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Re: Me, Myself and My little Man...
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 03:06:54 AM AEST
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A couple fine men here:) This is a moving write, we talked about the importance of what the adults do and dont do in our life, you are a great father! This is one of many traits and qualities I admire about you so much.
The poem is a delight, precious to be exact. I hope you shared this with your son he will treasure it always.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Me, Myself and My little Man...
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by Winterland on
Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 04:06:13 PM AEST
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Sometimes it can incredibly scary watching these smaller, walking, talking versions of ourselves go off into the world. Others times, it can be incredibly beautiful as your poem so lovingly portrays. May your son continue to grow into you and may he someday have as much pride in his son as you do in him.
Jennifer |
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Re: Me, Myself and My little Man...
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by starry_night on
Thursday, 12th October 2006 @ 07:35:24 AM AEST
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| This poem made me smile and think so much of my own son and how I feel. What a great write ... you've captured so many emotions .. and I'm still sitting here smiling thinking about your words ... that makes a great poem - well done ... Jan |
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