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mbe
Contributed by
Evangeline92
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Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 07:05:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I cannot eat or sleep at night
You always are within my sight
Always sneaking in my mind
But never can I seem to find
The solution to this problem here
The problem that I've had all year
This question keeps on coming up
even though I've given up
I cannot seem to let you go
I'm always acting in this show
it seems like we are meant to be
Like faith keeps pushing you and me
Together rather than apart
Always staying in my heart
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Evangeline92
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2006-10-10 19:05:46]
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Re: mbe
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by Spike on
Wednesday, 11th October 2006 @ 12:24:29 AM AEST
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Forelorn obsession does subsume everything, at least for a time. You captured the frenetic cyclic nature of those kinds of thoughts and feelings very well in this poem.
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