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A Random Heart
Contributed by
one-curly-fry
on
Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 07:10:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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The shape of the key
- took form
instinctive, but unexpected
a creature of the road
- car and map
load it up
drive; just drive!
rest when the night greets me
where? Wherever I am
plans just lead me astray
- to forget myself
the random heart
- now thats the inner voice!
The Great Ocean Road
The Red Centre
The Blue Mountains
The Daintree
it doesnt matter
- nothing matters
falling into ones heart
the leech is loose now
- my dear friend
we are young enough
- and light foot
lets grab some CDs
- load that car
have that road trip
and listen to the inner heart
memories and photographs
- to last a lifetime
love for life
- in its purest form
escape? Hardly
just listening in
with a new key in hand.
4/10/06
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2006-10-10 19:10:15]
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Re: A Random Heart
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by Alison on
Wednesday, 11th October 2006 @ 10:54:01 AM AEST
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| wow awesome write! still lined with some sadness, but i like it alot! |
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Re: A Random Heart
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th October 2006 @ 02:24:56 PM AEST
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Mr. Curly Fry---
thank you for all the comments XD
and lovely poem by the way...interesting, different - definitely random. but, wonderful flow and form...magical in a sense. absolutely beautiful.
- Bethani - |
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Re: A Random Heart
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th October 2006 @ 03:03:41 PM AEST
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this has got such spirit!
take your life and live it while your young! and never let go of the memories made
i love it!
peace dude! |
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Re: A Random Heart
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 04:22:12 PM AEST
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Tim~
I have read a few of your wonderful poems and I have to admit I'm becoming really hooked on to your work. Always varied and written with such artistic skill.
Young, free, live life to the max~ Keep up the great work. Thanks so much for posting this.
warm hugs,
Sue M |
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