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Jock Phillips Here
Contributed by
JockPhillips
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Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 07:45:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Getting the chain tensioners today
And it was already good
Listening to a song that is good too
Yeah so maybe today felt bad for most of the time there
But later on when after getting not much done
It was good to sit and relax for a while then
There was the car rail train in the background yeah
Lights and other things on the street there uh huh
It was an alright time to sit and write think
Not think about the rest of the day now
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JockPhillips
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2006-10-10 19:45:22]
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Re: Jock Phillips Here
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by brew on
Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 08:15:57 PM AEST
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To sit, and breath........Yes...Does help from time, to time. Good post
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Re: Jock Phillips Here
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 11th October 2006 @ 03:32:20 AM AEST
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To tell the truth, that was quite a bombardment of Jocks and Phillips's there at the opening, it was almost hard to get past. Do you think perhaps you might use your name a little less in author's notes, etc., since it's already clearly there as your username?
(yes, this is a message from the department of redundancy department)
Keep writing, though. And puncuation is a good thing, as well.
Andrew |
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