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intoxicated
Contributed by
hearts4pain
on
Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 10:20:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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The very first night we met
a night i will never forget
My eyes fixed, I couldn't stop staring
Like a little girl, I hope you didn't you notice me drooling
Upside down and full of giggles
With an unaccomplished handstand I felt like a cripple
all starting from the hiccups
I'm now known as the girl who threw up
In only a matter of a week or two
Some stuff went down. none of us had a clue
It might have been the stupidest rumor ever
But screw the clap. I'm J effing weener
So you've messed up?
What do I care?
We all go through life facing choices
We make mistakes, don't count the losses
I still care about you and think you're a great guy
I wish you knew I believe in you
All I can do it try
So everything is back on track again
time went by too fast
i thought this just began?
And now i have to say goodbye
Dangit this sucks and you don't understand why
when you held me i felt like one with you
too early i fell
too late it's gone
all I have are memories left
but just remembering your smile
makes it all worthwhile
writing this poem is the least I can do
I just can't seem to say the words to you
ps i love you
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2006-10-10 22:20:38]
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Re: intoxicated
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 11th October 2006 @ 05:13:17 AM AEST
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| Well done , a great little poem. |
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Re: intoxicated
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by brokenwings on
Wednesday, 11th October 2006 @ 05:26:55 AM AEST
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good job nice poem
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