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Slip Into The Night
Contributed by
The_Unknown
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Thursday, 12th October 2006 @ 03:26:52 PM in AEST
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Gasping for air You can be my oxygen Ill breath you in Feel the water throughout My body is cold I can hear The sweet decay Way down deep in my lungs! Smell my blood Catch me if I fall Everyone and everything Feels like It slips away I can hear you As you fade So spill my blood
Midnight skies turn scarlet red Say so long Say good night Catch me when I fall Into the night
If I slip away Into the night Say so long Say good night.
So spill my blood! And slit my throat. I can hear My sweet decay Midnight skies Turn scarlet red
You just sold out your hand So catch me when I fall Say goodbye Say good night Catch me when I fall into the night
My body is cold Everyone and everything Feels like it just slips away So spill my blood! slit my throat! I can feel The water throughout Way down in my lungs! Wake me up From this nightmare I know that I'm drowning In the blood Wake me up From this nightmare! Wake me up Wake me up From this nightmare So spill my blood! Slit my throat Bleed me dry and slit my throat! Let me die! Wake me up From this nightmare I know I'm drowning Wake me up When I slip into the night
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Re: Slip Into The Night
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rum on
Thursday, 12th October 2006 @ 05:18:53 PM AEST (User
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I really like this poem, though a little bit of organization is needed. I like the repitition and the spread out rhyming pattern. Look foward to more of your poems in the future. |
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Re: Slip Into The Night
(User Rating: 1 ) by JoeyTrib1550 on
Friday, 13th October 2006 @ 07:20:01 AM AEST (User
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Love the lyrics, great as always
I'd love to hear that...why don't you just sing it?;-)
...musik in the background, a microphone, and there you go :-P
I'd buy it ^^
with much love and regret, for they can't be seperated,
Marc |
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Re: Slip Into The Night
(User Rating: 1 ) by ravensofthedark on
Wednesday, 22nd November 2006 @ 10:28:00 AM AEST (User
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nice poem, oddly written, but that's life in a book isn't it
~The Raven |
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