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you can't fool me
Contributed by
LadyDama
on
Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 08:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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you can't fool me
i've been there before
we're going to go rounds
let's settle the score
bloodshot eyes
peeking from under a hood
i know what you're doing
you knew that i would
lessons not learned
chances not taken
i know you're hurting inside
but this behavior cannot be mistaken
think you can get
away with this crap
think you can play
and go take a nap
i tire of these games
this play you have acted
promises get old
they can't be retracted
grow up little girl
step up to the plate
if you keep on this way
you'll seal your fate
who'll be there to blame
when you're out on your own
you'll take the fall
your true self has been shown
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LadyDama
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2003-02-15 20:00:00]
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Re: you can't fool me
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 09:26:43 PM AEST
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alot of angry words spoken here, remember she's a child still in the learning process, try to guide her and be her friend it works better,
great write, |
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Re: you can't fool me
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by Nenny on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 02:27:50 AM AEST
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| Wow a good poem. I feel sorry for you for having to go through this with your step daughter. Don't give up! |
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Re: you can't fool me
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by LadyDama on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 05:13:55 AM AEST
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| yes, you are very right... these are words i feel but do not speak to her, as i know she is still a child... i have cared for her for 4 years... and her mother passed away last october, so i try to just be there for her... it has been a very rough road, as she has a lot of problems with lying... but everyday is a new day... i try to hug her often... ... thank you for your comments, thay ARE appreciated... |
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Re: you can't fool me
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by Wrybod on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 12:53:54 PM AEST
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LD
This is a world
vividly drawn
one I know not
wretched and torn
When the coastline
is all rocks galore
it's terribly hard
gettng ashore |
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Re: you can't fool me
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by LadyDama on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 03:48:01 AM AEST
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yes, dear friend
it can be hard
for every day's a struggle
but everyday has it's blessings
for this i'll make that struggle... |
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