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Halloween
Contributed by
lillyjane
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Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 05:51:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Little children trick and treating,
carrying bags with their sweets in,
dressed in costumes as ghosts and ghouls,
they laugh to think they have us fooled,
When they go home its quiet and still,
the clock strikes twelve, all, becomes real,
the living dead begin to stir,
who knows this night what will accur,
witches cackle weave their spells,
demons rise from the dephs of hell.
as the clock strikes the midnight hour.
can you hear, the werewolves howl,
peeping through curtains,what do I see,
a man in a cloak becons to me,
come my dear, its trick or treat,
I shiver from my head to my feet
sorry sir , I'm about to retire,
I collapsed in a heap, he was a vampire
On Halloween dont venture out,
you never know who's about,
your safer tucked up in your bed,
blankets wrapped around your head,
so stay indoors just in case,
ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH !!!!!!!!!!
something cold, just touched my face,
Oooops I scared myself.
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lillyjane
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Re: Halloween
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by Leoricx on
Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 06:08:56 AM AEST
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Excellent!
I remember, when I was a child, reading horror stories on Halloween and then not being able to sleep - every sound seemed sinister and caused me to jump out of my skin!
Well written
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Re: Halloween
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by doug on
Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 06:38:14 AM AEST
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Loved it. Halloween is my favorite
time of the year. Can't wait to see
what may happen. Take care , Truly
Doug
Happy Halloween to you. |
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Re: Halloween
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by jerseysue on
Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 01:14:51 PM AEST
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| Oh dear , best I don't come out on that night. This island has a rich history of witchcraft, they even had a witch museum called the Crucible. Best put me broomstick away till November then. HA ha Nice one Lillyjane, I love having the children round trick or treating, its a fun night. Loved the poem. Sue x |
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Re: Halloween
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 03:30:07 PM AEST
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Mmmmmmmmmm
They lay a rose across my chest, I hear them softly cry ............. another great write xxxxxx |
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Re: Halloween
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th October 2006 @ 05:08:41 PM AEST
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lilly .. such fun this time of year, no?
That last line made me chuckle .. lol
Great poem and yes .. a very mysterious night indeed
(one of the very things I love about it!)
~Breezy |
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Re: Halloween
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by Manda2 on
Monday, 16th October 2006 @ 02:57:24 PM AEST
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| Loved this one Lillyjane, I love Halloween and Holly loves it more than Christmas!! You've captured the mood so well, it's absolutely brilliant! xxxxx |
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Re: Halloween
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by maestar on
Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 10:13:02 AM AEST
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Love this poem so much,
It’s my fave time of year and you’ve captured it so well.
Great write,
Mae
xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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