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so far away
Contributed by
ipanema_gal
on
Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 09:48:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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A dream come true for me for you an apocalyptic summer in the stars and somewhere far away so far away they'll call our names in muted symphony our game of hide and seek will meet a stand still a drug induced pause as we shake with terror far away so far away you won't hear the screams of an apocalyptic summer in the stars though we are freezing to death in foreign arms they're calling you now to take the dive for vanity we know you'll move for the poison if not for the sake of your own sanity I know i'll be left here for I can take it all for in matters of ego i'm always left appalled
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Re: so far away
(User Rating: 1 ) by PoeticHybrid on
Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 09:54:52 AM AEST (User
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A very good write. |
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Re: so far away
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 08:30:39 PM AEST (User
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absolutely beautiful...i loved it.
you're an amazing writer, hope to hear more from you.
- Bethani - |
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Re: so far away
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th October 2006 @ 04:48:57 AM AEST (User
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a very nice poem. I liked it |
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