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Perfect Strangers
Contributed by
modjoe23
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Sunday, 15th October 2006 @ 01:00:38 AM in AEST
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Why is it that who I love can never be mine?
Is this lonely loveless life the eternal fine?
Why cant I be like others, why do I bleed?
Is it fair when others get what they need?
Of mankind, I never wanted to be so unique
Only admired this round rosy cheek
Wished for a hug, a kiss-the perfect treat
Dreamt of feeding from a smile, so sweet
They say Im a dreamer, were not meant to be
Yet I saw what ordinary eyes dont see
The souls glow and purity, the soft skin, the hair
The innocence, the satisfaction, the flair
I would sacrifice it all, true love is so rare
Were this dream reality, the Gods I would dare
But now I reflect gloomily and think of my fate
Can all the forces of the universe the truth annihilate?
In another world, could we be one?
Could we restart although we have not yet begun?
Cause if there is no more chance but a cheap lie
If I can never have youthen let me die!
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Re: Perfect Strangers
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th October 2006 @ 06:17:25 AM AEST
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A very deep poem for teenage angst, it's all rather a long time ago now, for me, but reading your poem brought back some of the insecurities I had in those days.
Just a question, what happened in the end ?, any luck, or is this the one that got away? |
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Re: Perfect Strangers
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by doug on
Monday, 16th October 2006 @ 12:41:10 AM AEST
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I had thoughts kind of like this
in my younger days though I
never expressed them quite
so well as you seem to have.
Really good for 13 I think.
Take care , Truly , Doug |
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