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Insane
Contributed by
funkgirl93
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Sunday, 15th October 2006 @ 05:47:39 AM in AEST
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She sits there
all alone
Nobody care
Everybody is insane
So what are humans for?
If they have no heart at all?
God needs them no more
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2006-10-15 05:47:39]
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Re: Insane
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by one-curly-fry on
Sunday, 15th October 2006 @ 06:51:03 AM AEST
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This sounds very personal.
I very much hope you're not feeling like this - isolation is something I can very much relate with and it can be oppressive.
Feeling does come through in this piece - which is impressive for such a short one.
Good write... I hope you also have your ups.
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Re: Insane
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th October 2006 @ 07:22:39 AM AEST
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this is strong emotionally for being so short & sweet.
in a way, it almost doesn't make sense...but, i do understand what your trying to say...
i love it !
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Re: Insane
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by wheels on
Friday, 20th June 2008 @ 05:11:59 AM AEST
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I hate to say this but a heart can exist, unfortunatley the world does its best to crush it - people can be so ugly. I've lost my one tru love to the ugliness of others - to hate, jealousy and rumors. Maybe we wont always travel a path alone, but I wish god would crush those with no heart - I truly do.
Thanks for this wonderful little poem
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