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Bittersweet
Contributed by
LittleWillow
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Monday, 16th October 2006 @ 03:01:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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bittersweet
was the first word to come to mind
when I decided to describe my feelings of you
but that would be too cliche
so I guess I'll have to think of another word
you are so abysmally perfect
yet flawlessly faulty
sometimes I want to wring your neck
with my bony fingers
you anger me in ways I can't understand
but then I picture your soft eyes
and I remember how gentle you can be
how much beauty you have inside you
and what a wonderful soul you are
then I wonder how you could ever be otherwise
your words may sometimes pierce my heart
but your smile, your laugh comes to mind
something inside turns around, and I realize your means
fervent
I think that's a better word
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LittleWillow
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2006-10-16 15:01:58]
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Re: Bittersweet
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by ever1der on
Monday, 16th October 2006 @ 03:52:54 PM AEST
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| wonderful discription of feelings.. |
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Re: Bittersweet
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by drtylilsecret on
Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 02:27:14 AM AEST
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i've got a friend like that...great write, very vivid.
--talli |
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