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erosion
Contributed by
vikingbrokk
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Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 02:56:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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light mist and heavy clouds
it is fog that guides my way
rivers and mountains will remain
long after i am forgotten
for i erode too
sheltered in my quiet place
i think of myself
growing older, but more aware
i have done so much
i have done so little
i would give it all
to re-live one day
with you
late now, and night is deep and still
i think myself foolish
for even believing
you've taken notice
can you see through the fog?
am i left here to stumble?
blindly?
if that is my fate
i will not wear it well
i will erode
with the other forgotten
and dream of the time
when i was alive
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vikingbrokk
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2006-10-17 14:56:22]
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Re: erosion
(User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 09:00:36 AM AEST
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Shocked that no one else has commented on this... I loved this... It was a very well written poem.. It was sad and made me think of a time in my life when I felt similar to this... I enjoyed reading this...
Take care
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