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Frozen Diamonds
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
on
Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 03:21:23 PM in AEST
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The air is a heavy blanket of desire
Suffocating with its heated sighs and
Yet, through the fog I still hear
You call to me
* * * * * * *
A candle whispers vanilla scented secrets
As you shed the last of your clothing by my side
~skin of caramel satin~
~soft curls of infinite darkness~
~lusciously winding curves~
~timeless eyes~
I kiss your toes with warm adoration
A willing slave to his goddess,
My mouth traveling along the forbidden paths
between your thighs
Ever
So
Slowly
* * * * * * *
Trembling beneath the fire of your lips
I cannot resist
The temptation of succumbing to
A night of ardent pleasure
* * * * * * *
I fill every pore,
Every soft and yielding sanctuary of your body
As you melt into my arms,
A smoldering whimper dancing on your tremulous lips
Darling, its been so long
* * * * * * *
My heart thrashes against its cage,
Screaming for release,
a breath
ragged
unfulfilling
And all I want is
an end
one final cry of
Closure
Tranquility
There after
* * * * * * *
only to be reborn from wet ashes
draining the past from your broken soul
and bathing you in a shower of
Frozen diamonds
(A/N- Many thanks to Scotty, who sparked my inspiration with his own bathtub poem, and to You... who is everything and the basis of all my love poetry. TQM, Querido.)
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Re: Frozen Diamonds
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 12:50:29 AM AEST
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wow simplely amazing piece
i have miss your poetry
~skin of caramel satin~
~soft curls of infinite darkness~
~lusciously winding curves~
~timeless eyes~
awsome
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Re: Frozen Diamonds
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by ever1der on
Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 02:52:52 AM AEST
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| "A candle whispers vanilla scented secrets" wow..what an amazing line....great job. |
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Re: Frozen Diamonds
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 01:41:40 PM AEST
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Well now ... ya know I dug this !!! If only I could be as inspirational all the time ... dang, wouldn't that be somethin' !!!! Beautiful words here Floridian Flower. Someone else out there is certain to be catching his breath each time he reads this. Good to see a fresh post from you, must I wait as long for the next one ?
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: Frozen Diamonds
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th November 2006 @ 03:53:48 PM AEST
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Almost sounds like an icecream sundae...almost...lol
Any way..very cleverly done!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: Frozen Diamonds
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 12:48:41 PM AEST
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wow, i absolutely loved this write..i read it three times, and i know you said it "isn't what it seems" , but it certainly seems great!!
every line is its own masterpiece...it had been a pleasure to read this!
wiz |
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Re: Frozen Diamonds
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by Lee on
Monday, 2nd June 2008 @ 06:34:02 AM AEST
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you've got a unique style and
excellent poet ability.
good stuff |
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