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Conducting disorder
Contributed by
Levymetal
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Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 11:18:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Perfection just a sin away-I take the heat to plan the ordeal of my fate
Molding rotten promises to stay the same
I am the weakness you've created, I bare all this weight.
Changed your face
To better fit my personal taste
Cant erase
The matter of the fact-
You only give just so you can take
Blemished excuses better fit our indecisive plan
You summon nothing into a crevice of slight chance
We are resulting in the faults we see within ourselves
Take away all you cant fix
No more mistakes
The matter of the fact is-
Were better off like this
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Levymetal
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2006-10-17 23:18:19]
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Re: Conducting disorder
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 11:44:26 PM AEST
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Interesting write. I've read it a couple a times and have found I quite enjoyed the read. The second time around, it just gave me this feeling of co-dependency...(shhhh that's a dirty word). I also felt such a thin line between love and hate. I like a read, that makes me think, one that makes my head flood with thoughts. This did it. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura |
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