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Once a Rhyme
Contributed by
Balmain_Tiger
on
Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 05:15:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I once thought a rhyme would solve my quest
I worked hard and did my very best
I put words together that had true mean
I wrote them for you who I thought as my queen
Till this day I feel the pain
You read my words and I was slain
Not a nerve in your heart they did touch
To you their value not very much
I plundered on still hope in my heart
With a thought I would get to the start
So many times so close I came
But everything just remained the same
Then at last I got you out
My mind now free to roam about
Entrenched though your stain will remain
There it stays so my resolve won`t wane
18 Oct 2006
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2006-10-18 05:15:48]
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Re: Once a Rhyme
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by strawberryshortcake on
Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 07:22:49 AM AEST
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| this speaks the the truth. some just don't care who they hurt or how.it's being able to get back out there and try again that counts. your poem seems to show that you did. good luck. |
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Re: Once a Rhyme
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by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 12:40:07 PM AEST
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| the story of my life good write |
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Re: Once a Rhyme
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by BSteel on
Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 04:46:10 PM AEST
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i feel like this is my story but instead of a queen its a higher being that haunts me,
very eloquent well done,
bsteel |
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Re: Once a Rhyme
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by emystar on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 08:24:41 PM AEST
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very good work.
huggs,
emy
I can relate totally. |
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