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broken love
Contributed by
lipsofanangel
on
Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 12:51:31 PM in AEST
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I see him in the same light
And I still feel the same
My knees go weak
When i hear him say my name
His eyes are losing their sparkle
But they'll never lose the shine, that used to always be
In his eyes
My stupitity tore us a part
Now only darkness clouds my heart
We are with different people
I wish we could be together
But i guess things wouldnt be the same
I realize we cant be together
But my feelings will never change
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2006-10-19 12:51:31]
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Re: broken love
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 02:04:42 PM AEST
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I'm a great believer in what is meant to be will be.
I guess this is one of those occasion where it wasn't meant to be.
Looking on the bright side, if you are still friends surely that must count for something.
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Re: broken love
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by Craze on
Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 05:40:55 PM AEST
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| good write |
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Re: broken love
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by Pain on
Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 05:46:00 PM AEST
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sounds like you need to move on he may noy want to be around you just get over it but you had a great description if you need help i do have a therapist whom i promote that may be able to help you
Sincerely sympathetic,
Toni |
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