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Within Yourself
Contributed by
honey56
on
Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 08:35:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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I looked into your eyes.. I dare not stare... Nor do I gape... Your eyes blinded with Blackness Your fears neatly stored Within yourself.. I feel your pain, I see Your tears.. Unlock your heart I dare you to trust Just take a chance Open your heart Let the sunshine come In and warm your soul Open your heart Let the season of gloom Part from your heart I dare you to trust And let go of all your Despair.. Let love be your flavor The sun your blanket.. Let the season of love Sustain you Open your heart I dare you to trust Forsake not our love.. For I shall cherish you In time of all season Look into my eyes
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Re: Within Yourself
(User Rating: 1 ) by one-curly-fry on
Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 12:19:12 AM AEST (User
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Nice flow..
I really like how this reads fairly quickly and eagerly - adds to the power of the words.
Good write!
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Re: Within Yourself
(User Rating: 1 ) by strawberryshortcake on
Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 02:08:00 PM AEST (User
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a good write no doubt! |
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