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Mirror, Mirror
Contributed by
Winterland
on
Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 04:17:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Mirror, Mirror,
Look at me,
Tell me all you see.
The tales of past and present, future.
Hidden deep in me.
Mirror, mirror,
Show to me,
All I wish to be.
Thoughts of dreams and hopes, wishes
Told to you by me.
Mirror, mirror,
Though I look,
And strain to see,
Looking back from you to me
Is always only
Me.
Copyright ©
Winterland
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2006-10-20 16:17:17]
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Re: Mirror, Mirror
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by sammydid on
Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 04:28:45 PM AEST
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Short, well-written, and thoughtful. I really like it!
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Re: Mirror, Mirror
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by suupjordan on
Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 04:34:53 PM AEST
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i enjoyed the rhyme scheme.
good job =) |
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Re: Mirror, Mirror
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by aloneinthememory on
Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 05:12:14 PM AEST
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wow i love it. I love the rhyme scheme you used in this. Very well written.
Fox |
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Re: Mirror, Mirror
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 06:47:45 PM AEST
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Excellent. A well thought out and superbly written bit of work here.
Very well done
Larry |
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Re: Mirror, Mirror
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st October 2006 @ 08:03:27 AM AEST
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| I know some people who hate looking in mirrors, if mirrors could only talk lol. Nice one. |
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Re: Mirror, Mirror
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 02:50:16 PM AEST
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Try looking deeper into the eyes of your reflection, I truly think there is more there than "only" you.
Clever write. |
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