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FIRE
Contributed by
MandiLee
on
Saturday, 21st October 2006 @ 06:44:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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You hurt me so much
How could I still love you?
Just the thought of you brings pain.
Yet something I can't explain
Love, dissaster, and finally
My heart is unbeating.
You are the lovely dissaster,
My longing desire.
I hoped you'd understand,
My obsession with fire,
So beautiful yet it burns
With every touch. Searing you
And forever reminding you
Of the mistakes you've made.
Copyright ©
MandiLee
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2006-10-21 18:44:06]
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Re: FIRE
(User Rating: 1 )
by BobbyZimmerman on
Saturday, 21st October 2006 @ 10:33:25 PM AEST
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| This is brilliant writing....aside from a few spelling mistakes, such as "disaster". However, the content is excellent and he was a fool to hurt such a talented and inspiring poet, keep up the good work. |
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