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I Sit Here Dying
Contributed by
alison
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Saturday, 21st October 2006 @ 08:36:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I sit here waiting,
Drowning in the loneliness and fear,
Wishing he will be looking for me,
Hoping he is searching for me,
Longing for him to find me.
I sit here waiting,
The water rushing over me,
Watching the hills before me,
Counting the car lights drive by,
Feeling the cold wind on my back.
I sit here waiting still,
No one notices or knows,
No one is looking for me are they?
No one is coming are they?
I sit here crying,
Only to be held,
Only to be smiled upon,
Only to be loved.
I sit here freezing,
Because no one cares,
Because no one hears,
Because no one is out there,
I sit here dying.
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alison
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2006-10-21 20:36:12]
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Re: I Sit Here Dying
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Saturday, 21st October 2006 @ 09:09:48 PM AEST
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Allison,
Hope this is not how you truely are feeling but if so know you are loved, great write, thanks for sharing, Valerie |
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Re: I Sit Here Dying
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by whiteleo1984 on
Saturday, 21st October 2006 @ 11:14:01 PM AEST
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| u have such sadness n ur words... things work out 4 the better if we want them 2... u just have 2 want it, wish u the best n ur endeavors... great write |
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Re: I Sit Here Dying
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by secretwind on
Saturday, 21st October 2006 @ 11:22:14 PM AEST
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I like this flow
I can feel the pain in this
well done |
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Re: I Sit Here Dying
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by one-curly-fry on
Sunday, 22nd October 2006 @ 10:10:36 PM AEST
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I keep an eye out for your work... I hope that counts for something.
Another powerful piece. I hope, if your work reflects your life at the moment, that it all picks up.
- Tim |
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