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Timebomb
Contributed by
darkscorpio
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Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 05:02:51 AM in AEST
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A mindless timebomb, has taken hold
Of my fragile mind, and I sense the cold
I feel like my insides are ripping apart
And I sense the demon, wants to kill for my heart
I feel the strength has left from my mind
And the cold burns the skin, off the girl who is kind
2/19/89
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2003-02-16 05:02:51]
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Re: Timebomb
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by tawakwan on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 06:05:01 PM AEST
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Re: Timebomb
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by docblood on
Thursday, 26th June 2003 @ 11:15:11 AM AEST
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| I've been there before. But, haven't all poets? Great stuff, alot of heartfelt meaning, but I wish you weren't suffering so much. |
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Re: Timebomb
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by docblood on
Thursday, 26th June 2003 @ 11:15:16 AM AEST
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| I've been there before. But, haven't all poets? Great stuff, alot of heartfelt meaning, but I wish you weren't suffering so much. |
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