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Magick Moments
Contributed by
spike
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Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 12:30:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Moments spun from lovers dreams,
Do not require spells and schemes....
No need for wands to focus power,
When hearts grows stronger on the hour
Nor potions and binding charms
While coiled tight in loving arms
Or hexes to immobilise,
When enchantment dwells in limpid eyes....
Lets put away the spelling books,
Cast the quills aside instead
Send parchments back into their nooks
And use the table for our bed
Better yet, go bar the door
And close the window shutters tight
Then let me lead you to the floor,
To conjure passion all the night....
Bewitch the ceiling so we can see,
Our twinkling, far-flung galaxy
Where Aries fans our energies
And Libra weighs our reveries
While comets arc in silent flight
To celebrate our sweet delight
And the mystery that does enthral,
(The greatest magic of them all...).
Copyright ©
spike
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2006-10-23 00:30:36]
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Re: Magick Moments
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by emystar on
Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 12:44:25 AM AEST
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Very beautifull, spell binding write.
huggs,
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Re: Magick Moments
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 01:40:34 AM AEST
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Wow! This is so lovely...so utterly enchanting. The magic you put in this piece was wonderful. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Magick Moments
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by shelby on
Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 10:52:03 AM AEST
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Enchanting write my friend, I wont quote my favorite part because the poem is perfect all around.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Magick Moments
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by MisfitMe on
Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 05:08:55 PM AEST
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| Brings the moon magick in this lunar lady |
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Re: Magick Moments
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by ever1der on
Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 08:28:49 PM AEST
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| I agree with all of the above..very lyrical. |
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Re: Magick Moments
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 09:14:19 PM AEST
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Well, my hat's off to you my friend. This is poetry at its very finest. What poetic thoughts....I am envious.
Very well done
Roses and drinks
Larry |
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Re: Magick Moments
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th November 2006 @ 01:03:42 PM AEST
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Damn your good! def one of the if not the finest poet I've read on this site, if only you were English you'd be perfect! (it's something we were taught at school to love Australians but for Gods sake don't let them know! lol) Great writing.
J. |
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Re: Magick Moments
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by artjunkiekyle on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 02:29:03 PM AEST
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my absolute favorite from you. this is well written and beautiful. my thumbs are up.
-kyle |
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Re: Magick Moments
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by priss on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 09:58:54 PM AEST
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oh spike, this is so beautiful... so passionate...so magical...i love every line. once again, you have captivated me.
~priss |
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