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This Song
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
on
Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 01:28:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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I hear that song play
and somehow
all is shut out
transformed into
a moment
transcended in time
a brief moment
but so treasured
Wisconsin Lake Air
I can smell it now
as if I were right there
whilst she lapped my feet
Darkened night
All asleep
but me
Digging the sounds
of the Mequon night
and this song
Oct 2004
Laura Horner
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deadheadpoet
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2006-10-23 01:28:01]
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Re: This Song
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by emystar on
Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 01:34:50 AM AEST
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Good work.
It always amazes me to look back on what I've written.
Awesome.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: This Song
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 08:23:44 AM AEST
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Perfectly nastolgic!
It makes me want to know what song it was too! |
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Re: This Song
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by shelby on
Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 10:50:26 AM AEST
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Incredible sis,
descriptive and captivating.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: This Song
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by ever1der on
Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 12:51:30 PM AEST
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| what song???? dang it Laura..nice write though. |
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Re: This Song
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by one-curly-fry on
Tuesday, 24th October 2006 @ 08:49:25 PM AEST
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Beautiful write...
I can relate to this - I'm going through a phase of 80's music... It's taking me back to the crazy 80's and all the good times, smells and bright colours... It's amazing how music really does carry you away huh?
The imagry this piece brings up is very nice and for such a short piece, it's very effective!
Good write!
- Tim |
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