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Eyes Of An Angel
Contributed by
Craze
on
Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 09:21:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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Pain from all these years brought me so many tears,
Wrought by all my fears but there are no cures for these tears that no one hears,
As the smoke clears I,m afraid to see whose still there and if anyone will they care,
I dare someone to stop and look... look into these eyes as my inner child dies,
As my heart cries and my body sighs as lays down to rest,
I did my best but i failed gods test,
As death to my demise tries to take my soul,
As i crie tears from the eyes of an angel
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Re: Eyes Of An Angel
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by spiritwind on
Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 11:55:48 AM AEST
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Your hurting deeply I sense. Emotions at the rawest form here.
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Re: Eyes Of An Angel
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by Pain on
Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 09:47:21 AM AEST
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| so lovely it makes me want to cry |
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Re: Eyes Of An Angel
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 31st October 2006 @ 12:24:48 PM AEST
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Raw emotions... This was good.. I am sorry that you are at a conflicting time in your life right now...
Take care
Christina |
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Re: Eyes Of An Angel
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by Jen54 on
Wednesday, 8th November 2006 @ 08:46:07 AM AEST
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wonderful poem.
when you said
"I dare someone to stop and look... look into these eyes as my inner child dies"
I started to cry. Very good job.
-jen |
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Re: Eyes Of An Angel
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by Jen54 on
Wednesday, 8th November 2006 @ 08:46:08 AM AEST
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wonderful poem.
when you said
"I dare someone to stop and look... look into these eyes as my inner child dies"
I started to cry. Very good job.
-jen |
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Re: Eyes Of An Angel
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by lipsofanangel on
Wednesday, 29th November 2006 @ 02:00:01 PM AEST
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omg i didnt know u felt this way.
your so talented i swear
ali |
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Re: Eyes Of An Angel
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 03:30:45 PM AEST
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such a strong powerful poem.
very emotive.
a goo read, well done |
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