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Regret
Contributed by
rogue
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Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 01:39:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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On top of the mountain, or in the valley below
there is a small boy, who has no place to go
He wonders around alone, without a tear
He accepts his fate, without any fear
He slowly progresses when it comes to years
ONe day he sights a boat that brings him to tears
He finds the people and is rescued, no longer a stray
He exists his home regretable, as his island drifts away
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2006-10-23 13:39:36]
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Re: Regret
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 06:27:16 PM AEST
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| I think this is a good poem. I liked the rhythm. |
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