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My Limitations
Contributed by
one-curly-fry
on
Tuesday, 24th October 2006 @ 08:56:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I could write for you a sonnet
or soliloquy to show my heart
I could waste a tree of paper
- a pool of ink
on a message never to get through
for we are nothing alike
which cant be helped or hated
its just the facts
torn against this seat
I appear the labourer
but give me a word
and the mind breaks forth
give me a smile
out comes an undying heart
Im nothing I was suppose to be
Im everything that comes naturally
stuck against this seat
aware of my foreign tongue
- my strange philosophy
able to do anything
except get through to you.
24/10/06
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one-curly-fry
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2006-10-24 20:56:27]
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Re: My Limitations
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th October 2006 @ 09:20:37 PM AEST
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it's so sad! a love not returned. Not trying, it just happens, out pours your heart...then they really turn away
i know the situation
good poem! |
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Re: My Limitations
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by whiteleo1984 on
Tuesday, 24th October 2006 @ 11:53:15 PM AEST
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| very sad, a love that is not returned... i've been there, but things do get better, i know cause they happened 2 me. |
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Re: My Limitations
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by Alison on
Wednesday, 25th October 2006 @ 08:06:52 PM AEST
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| wow my heart cried as I read this! Its so sad...I dont know what else to say...good write... |
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Re: My Limitations
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 25th October 2006 @ 10:36:42 PM AEST
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Tim, I really enjoyed this write. I can hear your frustrations loud and clear. Very well written.
Peace, Laura |
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