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lost him
Contributed by
youngpoet69
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Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 04:33:25 PM in AEST
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forsaken fogotten though yet there
full of pain, full of dispair
unseen, unknown though yet be
lost and somewhat crazy
dehydrated, discriminated though yet feel
he's there and he's real
unheard, undiscovered though yet speak
he's lost and he's weak
wishing, wanting for the pain to stop
from his life he wants fear to drop
strain, and strife left behind
total chaos in his mind
agony, anguish because of the empty part
tears to drown his beating heart
pressure, gravity always take over
to much to carry on his shoulders
confession, confusion of maddening thoughts
want light to fill his big black spot
many, memories from dark moments
still his name is unspoken
hope, happiness he never felt
searching but never getting help.
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2006-10-26 16:33:25]
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Re: lost him
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by Saloni on
Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 04:44:50 PM AEST
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| powerful literature very well written well done.. |
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Re: lost him
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by donttrytofixme on
Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 04:46:43 PM AEST
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This is awsum, i think of my g/f in this way at times, she never is happy, but i hope that someday that will change. I really liked this one!
I'm not Broken |
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Re: lost him
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by Jackee_line on
Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 04:48:00 PM AEST
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| well done a nice read |
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Re: lost him
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by allforyou on
Wednesday, 8th November 2006 @ 08:49:55 PM AEST
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[applauds]
nice. |
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