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Replaced
Contributed by
babydevaney308
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Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 06:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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she tells me i can't be replaced
that we are able to communicate like no one eles
i turn around for one minute and u r tellin those lines to my replacement
so to her i have no feelings but i do and i need to be treated fairly
Now guess whos being replaced by a friend who keeps pacts
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Re: Replaced
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by kolbrun on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 06:17:10 AM AEST
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Very powerful u put a lot of emotion into this. I enjoyed this a lot. Keep on writing.
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