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Make This Love Real
Contributed by
HubcapDave
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Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 05:42:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I raise my face up to the sky
Plead to the gods, and ask them why
I cannot find the love I seek
To come this close, but be out of reach
To have my hopes grow, then fade away
Living in misery, day after day
I beg them, Please! I want no more
Than to have the hope I had before
Give me my chance, don't take it from me
Give me the choice to set my heart free
If I could feel the touch of her skin
No way I would I fail, I could only win
Were I to tell her the things that I feel
I know I could make this love real
Copyright ©
HubcapDave
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2006-10-26 17:42:19]
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Re: Make This Love Real
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by Justintears on
Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 06:07:31 PM AEST
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Nice flow and strong feeelings. I totally know what these feelings bring. nice writing and keep the hopes alive...
~Justin~ |
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Re: Make This Love Real
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by Kalika on
Friday, 27th October 2006 @ 10:59:06 AM AEST
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Powerful stuff, I can really feel where this came from.
Kali |
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Re: Make This Love Real
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th October 2006 @ 04:19:07 PM AEST
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| You paint a beautifully sad picture. Well done.......Mike |
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