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You dont have to love me
Contributed by
evolon
on
Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 10:09:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When I touch
You, past the physical
Straight to the heart
When I give
My, all to you
Weakness, strength every part
How I care about
With genuine compassion
What you care for
How I can not tell
But show Im forever
You dont have to look anymore
Who else is like me
Can make a bad day alright who else but me
In my sleep squeeze you tight
What more can I do
To prove
That you complete my life
What steps do I have to take
To have you with me daily
And reunited in the after life
Where are all my thoughts
Besides with you
Where can I cry
Feel strong while weak, only next to you
Why then are we apart
Why did love die
Why did I have to hear
Why did you lie
Why did you ask if we could retry
Why am I even considering..?
WHY
I cant
You dont have to love me
Copyright ©
evolon
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2006-10-26 22:09:22]
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Re: You dont have to love me
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by hoist1atca on
Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 11:00:32 PM AEST
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Very moving-
Love is such a hard game to win-
The reason that love is so hard is that the rules change so often-
You have made your stand-
Will you be able to hold it-
Very well written-
Hope to read more from you
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Re: You dont have to love me
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 27th October 2006 @ 05:07:19 AM AEST
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| A touching write, well done |
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Re: You dont have to love me
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by MiZzUnDaZtOoD on
Saturday, 28th October 2006 @ 01:57:45 AM AEST
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| nice poem...i knew u was never over her.. u can say what u want n try n hide the feelings u have but face it they aint goin any where u need to stop lying to yourself... "it is what it is" she askin for u back i think u should do sumthin before its to late... they say things happen for a reason but what do i know? anyways this was a nice poem "i luv it" lol and as yall say " good write" lol oh ps u needa finish the one bout me.. makes sum changes in it or w/e u have to do but i still wanna read what u was thinkin at the time |
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