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(untitled)
Contributed by
atra_phasma
on
Friday, 27th October 2006 @ 01:15:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I can not let them see
My other side
So I built a wall
So i could hide
For almost a year and a half,
You see,
No one has seen
The real me
Out of fear of rejection
Mockery, pain
I built this wall to seem normal, tame
But the wall presented a problem
A large and gaping flaw
Although nobody could get inside
I couldn't let anything out at all
It built and it built,
This wall of emotion
Until in my head
I began to have notions
Notions of a terrible breed
Notions that I didnt want inside me
And with nothing to do
With these ethreal voices
I heeded their word
Made terrible choices
And soon my wall
Began to crumble
I got out the back,
But at a cost,
My life, you see,
was forever lost
And all because one grain of rice
Tips the ***** scale,
One straw breaks the camel's back
And beacause lack of a true confidant
Sent my life to hell
Copyright ©
atra_phasma
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2006-10-27 13:15:22]
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Re: (untitled)
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by angelfreak on
Friday, 27th October 2006 @ 06:39:03 PM AEST
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| Good to know you're alive and not that depressed :) Your words really hit home, I was totally in that place almost a year ago. It's nice to hear it in anothers words, so I know where I don't want to be again. |
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by ever1der on
Saturday, 28th October 2006 @ 03:27:16 PM AEST
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| thanks for signing my guest book..good write. I could feel dispair and sadness. |
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Re: (untitled)
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by Amicus on
Saturday, 11th November 2006 @ 10:00:47 AM AEST
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This one was very good too matt. Though i think if you had been half way through you could write some more poetry (i'm just joking but seriously write more)
This was a great write. I now know i could learn from your great writing talents
great job,
Amicus |
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