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cry sweet music ( bad title)
Contributed by
spider
on
Friday, 27th October 2006 @ 07:10:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I burned your skin and bruised your limbs
Broke you down and tore you up
Why would the world want you now you're so ***** up?
Your silent screams fill my world
You're the sweetest music that I've ever heard
Who can you turn to now? Except me in my golden throne
Close your eyes, let yourself go and sink
Into my arms, into my comforting insanity
Give yourself to me in your entirety and we shall live
Sing for me, i long to hear your voice
We will dance to the music of your cries.
You fall and i kiss the tears from your eyes
And i love you.
I won't let you go, it's too late, you know
What will it take to make you see that you need me?
Look at the pieces of the life you had before
I adore you
You'll only cry for me and only dance with me
Broken down and weeping in my arms, you finally see
I won't let you go, so sing for me a little more
You are mine
Your silent screams fill our world
You're the sweetest music that I've ever heard
Who do you cry for now? Only me in my golden throne
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Re: cry sweet music ( bad title)
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by emystar on
Friday, 27th October 2006 @ 07:30:49 PM AEST
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Very sad but great writing. I know from experience that abuse of any kind from another is pure hell.
huggs, prayer,
emy
Hang tuff and get far away from your abuser. |
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Re: cry sweet music ( bad title)
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by secretwind on
Friday, 27th October 2006 @ 10:27:57 PM AEST
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This is a flow
of extreme silent screams,
well done.
As emy said get away from you're abuser
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Re: cry sweet music ( bad title)
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 28th October 2006 @ 07:59:28 AM AEST
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I found this to be erratic and confusing...now wait a minute...I dont mean that in a bad way. It imitates the rediculous thought patterns of one who thinks that they can control by threats and abuse. Somewhere in their sick minds it all makes sense.
Perfectly written for the chosen subject
Very well done
Roses
Larry |
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