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Now Your Gone
Contributed by
emochick121
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Sunday, 29th October 2006 @ 03:29:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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What happened? One minute you were here Beside me The next you were gone
All that was left was memories Not a single photo Not a single letter Just a dead body
You pretended you were happy You pretended that you were enjoying life You never got the help you needed You never got a chance
Instead you got the knife Put it to your wrist Cut to deep killed yourself
The blood that poured on the ground The blood that came from you The blood that was so red The blood that drenched your life away
The minute you were found It was to late You were out complety Never to Return
The guilt that ran through me How much I screamed I cryed so hard I could of killed myself
The minute you left Life had no meaning Without you in it There is nothing to enjoy
But something happened that night And now your gone Never to Return I cry myself to sleep at night
Your gone I loved you I miss you Your gone forever
Copyright ©
emochick121
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2006-10-29 03:29:41] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Now Your Gone
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th October 2006 @ 05:26:53 AM AEST (User
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Gosh....what can I say?
This is just.... saddeningly, destructive...
Heart-wrenching...
I'm very sorry.
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Re: Now Your Gone
(User Rating: 1 ) by drtylilsecret on
Sunday, 29th October 2006 @ 10:26:22 PM AEST (User
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wow, that sent shivers throughout my whole body. i am so sorry for your loss, kinda makes me feel guilty for considering it myself....but fantastic write, really felt your pain. good luck.
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Re: Now Your Gone
(User Rating: 1 ) by donttrytofixme on
Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 05:59:27 PM AEST (User
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I feel this poem it hits close to home, my g/f her friends helped her od, and they all *****ed at me when i wanted to help her, wow what friends right. Neways, i feel that this way even though she didnt die, i feel what would have happened if i wasnt there, her friends would have killed her, i dont know i just think about that when i read ur poem |
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