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the beach
Contributed by
Recovery_poet
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Sunday, 29th October 2006 @ 12:00:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Like walking down the beach on a hot day your skin is warm
I sink into it with each touch like every step
Your eyes cool and inviting like the waves bringing in the tide
I dive in and I am submerged in a cool comfort that I never want to leave
I cannot breathe so I swim to shore and lie in the soft sand and bask in the warm sun that is your soul
A gentle wind cools my skin and warms my ears with the sweet song of your voice
You are the ocean in my heart
Let these waves wash away all the scars of a time before
Tides pulling away the dark and pushing in the light
While I lie and write poetry in the sand
Someone steps into my sun casting a shadow that is familiar
You brush the hair out of my eyes
You lie with me on top of the blanket of words I created
We begin the write a new poem in the sand
One that only you and I can read
And the tide comes in and spreads all my emotion
Through out my whole entire ocean
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Recovery_poet
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2006-10-29 12:00:58]
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Re: the beach
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 29th October 2006 @ 12:22:36 PM AEST
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OOOOohhhh I found this very beautiful, the relationship, the love, combined with the soothing feel of the ocean. Beautiful piece of writing here. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: the beach
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by MisfitMe on
Sunday, 29th October 2006 @ 06:40:36 PM AEST
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Beautiful, just beautiful. I'm sitting here reading it with a friend who at the close joined me in a synchronized, " Awww..." followed by a,"Wow!"& another,"Awww..." I love the blanket of words you created. Right on...Write on...
BigLoveMuchPeace,
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Re: the beach
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by GravityEatsTheDawn on
Friday, 12th June 2009 @ 08:25:44 AM AEST
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| Very intense, beautiful write.(: |
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