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The uncontrollable rage
Contributed by
darkscorpio
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Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 12:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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It's like a monster, screaming in the night That gets yourself in and out of a fight It doesn't have a brain, it goes on instinct Whatever it attacks, the thing will sink Sometimes you wish during the uncontrollable rage, You could keep it down, put it back in it's cage It takes control, and after it's done It boasts "I'm not prejudice, I hate everyone" Is there a way to hold back this thing? That every time it hits, it gives off a death ring What's so strange, is that it's like treasure Every time it takes hold, it gives you pleasure Inside there's a war, between you and it One side wants to kill, the other wants a pit This pit will grow, and envelop your rage And put it away in an inescapable cage You've got to put it away, before it's permanently out You've got to fight instinct, get up and shout " don't need you now, leave me alone When I want you, I'll call you, you're just a drone" You better pray, you find a cure Before you kill someone, that's for sure
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Re: The uncontrollable rage
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jade on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 01:55:43 AM AEST (User
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I LIKE THIS POEM. ESPECIALLY IF IT IS ONE OF YOUR FIRST. |
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Re: The uncontrollable rage
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 10:30:26 AM AEST (User
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It certainly shows how you've developed. I think this one has many expressive ideas. |
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