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Dreaming Bridges
Contributed by
Man_On_High
on
Tuesday, 31st October 2006 @ 01:40:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Skies the grey of crystal,
a strange design of bridges..
some straight some arched-
others descending at oblique angles to the first
and these figures, reoccuring in other lit-up circuts,
are long.. lighting the banks;
some laden with domes sink and shrink.
A few, covered in hovels..
others support poles
and signals; frail parapets.
Minor chords and cables
cross each other and disappear-
ropes rise out from nowhere.
The water is blue.. and grey, my mind;
as wide as arms open to the sea:
till a white ray into me,
destroys this comedy and delight
and I wake.
B
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Re: Dreaming Bridges
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 02:57:51 AM AEST
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Another fine piece, Billy. I like the recurrence of the sounds throughout - it sounds very good. Each word well-picked also. Nicely done, nicely done.
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Re: Dreaming Bridges
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 06:19:45 PM AEST
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Dearest Poet Billy~ Another remarkable piece of writing to add to your other numerous masterpieces. Great word choice and captivating as always. I can only dream of writing anything as brilliant as this. A beaut of a write my dear friend. A most treasured experience visitng your pages as always. Bravo, and thanks once again for sharing with us your beautiful work~
love n hugs from ur fan/friend,
Sue M |
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Re: Dreaming Bridges
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 11:27:16 PM AEST
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Dreaming Bridges...fine write, Billy. You have such a wonderful way of capturing your reader. Excellent. I so love your poetry.
Peace and hugs, Laura |
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Re: Dreaming Bridges
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 10:20:25 PM AEST
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my dearest .. dreaming bridges .. leads to building them ..
and bridges are such a phantasmagorical creation!! They lead
us to so many opportunities that would not have been
available to us otherwise, no? I cannot think of anything
more splendid to dream about! visionary
Unimaginable imagery here, babe. I got completely caught
up within it. Jack has been painting bridges on my windowpane ..
Your first stanza reminded me of that ~
Your words, always so improbably poetic, have captivated me
again~
XO
~Breezy |
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Re: Dreaming Bridges
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd July 2007 @ 05:10:35 AM AEST
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FRAUD Arthur Rimbaud should devour your soul soon enough! You are not a human being Billy. You are a modified copycat of a waltzing moron who dribbles about his clothing.
 Rimbaud again |
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