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Cheesy Love Lines
Contributed by
MandiLee
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Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 07:43:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I must tell you my secret,
The secret that...
I love you.
I might not show it,
But believe its true.
The amazing thing is
I can't stop thinking about you!
I wanted to tell you to your face the truth
About me loving you.
I just hope one day you'll love me too.
Your my inspiration of a better life,
And your one of the most amazing things
That has ever happened to me.
But I don't want to tell you
A cheesy love line.
So, I will stick with I love you!
Copyright ©
MandiLee
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2006-11-01 19:43:47]
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Re: Cheesy Love Lines
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 08:00:43 PM AEST
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Simply a beauty.
Though I rarely comment on poems asking
for comments Im glad I read this one.
Continue writing and always say I love you.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Cheesy Love Lines
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by yangdantien on
Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 08:11:28 PM AEST
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Ah to be in love and see the best in another and when its secret it yearns for release simply as an
"...inspiration of a better life..."
Mandilee your hearts voice sings through the tip of your pen and reveals the passion flowing through your veins as well as your gifts alongside your 'secret' exposed.
Keep it flowing, keep reading, I look forward to your comments and your take.
Peace
Yang
PS it aint cheddar, its butter... |
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Re: Cheesy Love Lines
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 08:15:43 PM AEST
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I agree with Michelle
lol you did good on this write
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Re: Cheesy Love Lines
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by mastersr16 on
Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 08:30:22 PM AEST
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| how sweet... |
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Re: Cheesy Love Lines
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by EddieDean on
Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 09:37:52 PM AEST
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Wow, its like you have read my mind, and seen into my heart. I too yearn to tell that someone in my life that I love her, but I can't find the right words. You are right,
"Your my inspiration of a better life,
And your one of the most amazing things
That has ever happened to me.
But I don't want to tell you
A cheesy love line.
So, I will stick with I love you! "
thats all we ever have to say, very nicely done.
keep em comin!
Eddie Dean |
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Re: Cheesy Love Lines
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 10:56:31 PM AEST
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Very beautifull-n-sweet.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Cheesy Love Lines
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by sed on
Thursday, 2nd November 2006 @ 12:19:44 AM AEST
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| Yeah I know the feeling trying to tell someone, very well written:)! |
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Re: Cheesy Love Lines
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by sadaddy on
Thursday, 2nd November 2006 @ 12:49:25 AM AEST
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Sometimes "I love you" is all it takes to let someone special now how you feel. Enjoyed the read it was a cute write. May your heart be filled with peace and joy.
sadaddy
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