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Walls of Pain
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Silent-No-More
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Thursday, 2nd November 2006 @ 01:56:17 AM in AEST
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Re: Walls of Pain
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by Spike on
Thursday, 2nd November 2006 @ 02:13:00 AM AEST
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Ah, Snemko, back to rhymes I see - and what a poem! dark, disturbing, with a groundswell of tragedy hinting at the ebb and flow of mania. I have a porch she can do, once the walls are double-coated.
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Re: Walls of Pain
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by shelby on
Thursday, 2nd November 2006 @ 09:32:58 AM AEST
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Wow Snem,
Your words reach out and just grab hold of me. Profound would be a good word but not the best to describe this. I wish you would post more often because I sure enjoy basking in your talent! Depth cannot be described with this one.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Walls of Pain
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 2nd November 2006 @ 11:54:26 AM AEST
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Snem, This was deeply disturbing with hints of abuse. I was very touched by the read and the picture. I am in constant awe of your writings.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: Walls of Pain
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd November 2006 @ 08:35:49 AM AEST
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Hey, this is all yours. I was just moral support.
It turned out great! It reads smoothly and has a waelth of depth! The repetition of the first line is nicely orchestrated and meaningful.
And the name calling, as I recall ...you quite deserved it!! :) |
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Re: Walls of Pain
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 6th November 2006 @ 08:38:09 PM AEST
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"stands tossing roses at your feet "
The concept....the content....this is perfection.
Very well done
Larry ( who will come back to this page time and time again) |
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Re: Walls of Pain
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 02:04:59 PM AEST
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| This is so excellent |
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Re: Walls of Pain
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 9th September 2020 @ 12:28:12 AM AEST
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| Off the hook |
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