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Lost Soul
Contributed by
Caged Soul
on
Thursday, 2nd November 2006 @ 05:41:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Fragments of me-
scattered through time,
displaced in moments of carelessness
and lost through actions of neglect.
Fragments of me
sown to the Earth-
the world harvesting the fruits of my good nature,
hungry soil suck dry
in space de-voided of
fertilization and re-germination.
In an attempt to avoid barren conclusion-
I go in search of scattered fragment of me
with optimistic hopes of rediscovery
from misconceptions of times long gone.
Fruitful seeds of success is what I find
amidst mountains of tangled vines
& vicious weeds; chaotic creeds I leave behind
as I mount unwavering steed & proceed-divorced
from the greed of mothers unconditional love.
For then, and only then, can growth occur,
and only then can IO begin to reassemble
those fragments of me,
scattered through time.
Copyright ©
Caged Soul
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2006-11-02 05:41:15]
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Re: Lost Soul
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 2nd November 2006 @ 11:38:05 AM AEST
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Damn fine job with this one, Ash.
"those fragments of me,
scattered through time"
Always good to see you post, man. Take care.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: Lost Soul
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by flamingblade on
Friday, 3rd November 2006 @ 12:06:28 PM AEST
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lovely poem,
really easy to relate to.
well done
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Re: Lost Soul
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by sidneyconrad23 on
Monday, 8th November 2010 @ 02:23:24 PM AEST
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| Wow you do have a gift from God keep writting. |
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