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To A Love
Contributed by
suupjordan
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Friday, 3rd November 2006 @ 04:44:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A love I cant explain,
With ink and a world of time.
If words were single drops,
I would run the ocean dry.
With everything I feel ,
When your breath turns into mine.
Reborn with every kiss,
As if Ive never been alive.
Feelings of dismay,
Regret, worry, fear.
Never show their presence,
While we are lying here.
Your voice, your breath, your heart,
Are all that catch my ears.
Our love, our work of art,
Wont be bounded by the years.
My thoughts are such a mess,
And to this I must confess.
But with you I am composed,
You are the cure to my distress.
Nothing can ever change this,
No one could ever tame us.
And to my mind and body,
Your name is pretty famous.
Copyright ©
suupjordan
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2006-11-03 16:44:37]
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Re: To A Love
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by MandiLee on
Friday, 3rd November 2006 @ 08:02:13 PM AEST
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| WOW beautiful poem!!! i love it! |
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Re: To A Love
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by Kellros on
Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 05:20:30 AM AEST
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| Good write but the last verse doesn't entirely capture the whole image :), but I liked the rest. |
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Re: To A Love
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 07:40:54 AM AEST
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| The second of your poems I have read. Promised so much and flowed so well But alas lost me a tad at the end. Still a very good poem that I enjoyed reading |
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